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self expression
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i slice and dice
cut and scrape
to try to feel
what i do not
i put them
all together
to create
my artwork
you dont understand
my artwork
its my self expression
of hope and pain
if you were to see
the way the light
hits the blood
it would make sense
it looks so beautiful
shimmers
every which way
makes everything seem real
theres real
and make believe
when you see it
it all seems real
it takes you
from fiction
to reality
when the blood flows
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2005-06-11 21:07:49]
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Re: self expression
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by imagenuinefake on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:23:51 PM AEST
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That's really good! ^.^
I can feel the words flow, and I can feel what the narator is going through. Very real |
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Re: self expression
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:49:09 PM AEST
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i liked this. it has a good flow and lots of emotion can be seen.... i just wish it weren't true. i wish everything could be all right for you. wishing you the best of luck!!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work |
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Re: self expression
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:47:46 PM AEST
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not a very healthy way to muse your work..
but I liked it just the same..
good write-
M.O.H. |
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