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Because of You
Contributed by
imagenuinefake
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:09:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Because of You,
Happy dagger,
I have no tale to tell.
Because of you,
Horrible father,
My life is a living hell.
With this knife,
I'll stay true to my word.
And with this gun,
I'll leave this world.
I'm no longer needed,
I'm just a stick in the mud.
I let my dreams
Crash before my eyes.
I watch my friend
as she slowly dies.
I cry all night,
From the pains you cause.
Happy dagger,
With this light,
Let me see
My end tonight.
Copyright ©
imagenuinefake
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2005-06-11 21:09:01]
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Re: Because of You
(User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:21:25 AM AEST
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| very depressing...sad....good tho and very real read mi poems called hardest thing, how it started, dont give up thanks keep writing~!Chrissie |
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Re: Because of You
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:49:58 PM AEST
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simple is best..
no fan fare or unnecessary wording..
I liked it a lot
Great write..
M.O.H. |
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Re: Because of You
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 03:56:43 PM AEST
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| Very sad. You have a very unique way of writing and expressing yourself, it's very interesting to read and it really makes the reader understand your feelings and thoughts. You are a great writer. |
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