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You Won, I Lost
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:40:04 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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You win, I lose This is the truth You gained a girlfriend In the end I lost you When you became untrue You, my best friend, are now an ex Thats not a great place To be on my list But I guess Im too ****** To really care now I just live in hell That is all I know I want to go And leave Because I believed In you And trusted you, too But Ive got my punishment For not using my best judgment To tell if you were a good friend Or not, but in the end We found out Because you won, while I lost
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Re: You Won, I Lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:53:21 PM AEST (User
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you have not lost, he did, he lost you, u r a terrific person, so if he leaves then he didn't deserve u |
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Re: You Won, I Lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by SageofHalo123330 on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 06:23:26 PM AEST (User
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i agree. to write something like this takes a beautiful soul thats been scorned. its his loss. you have nothing to be sad about. |
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