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When You Let it Slip
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:47:26 PM in AEST
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Normal to my eyes,
but behind your eyes,
a mask, a guise
containg all the I's,
the we's, the you's
that confuse,
distorted
what I saw,
what I thought I saw
in the person here,
it's no longer clear
that we you say
is what you mean
or that what I've seen
was really here in front of me.
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CodyJ
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2005-06-11 21:47:26]
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Re: When You Let it Slip
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:29:11 PM AEST
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thought provoking...
some interesting notions here.
well done. |
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