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In the Absence of Affection
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:13:04 PM in AEST
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Yes its true
I do care what you think
I am shallow -
Does that make me weak?
A complete stranger,
You are
Among thieves
The curator of the trust
Ran off with the deed
In the absence of affection
A new type of erection
Emerges
Where the mind stimulates
The fingers permeate
Submerges
In your conscious
All the points
Begin to relate
Connect
A common denominator
To which all
Is tied to fate
__________
_______
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-06-12 14:13:04]
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Re: In the Absence of Affection
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:24:26 PM AEST
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What will be will be...those stuck in the past may never see...
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Re: In the Absence of Affection
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by ShesAKillerQueen on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:22:00 PM AEST
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beautiful write, your word flow is fantastic. ^_^
~Kreamy
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Re: In the Absence of Affection
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by ShesAKillerQueen on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:22:11 PM AEST
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beautiful write, your word flow is fantastic. ^_^
~Kreamy
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Re: In the Absence of Affection
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:29:39 PM AEST
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Actually an admission of caring would be a sign of strength I think. Too often we're all afraid to care; especially as often as people get burned.
The last part was a unique metaphor.
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