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Burn out bright
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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fingers stream through the sky
the morning stepping through
lights coming fast
Breathe
signals, recieve
drive me to the sea
into the wind
ill crash eternally
in come the grey
streetlights greet
before the rising of the day
looking through, the city's life unknown
we have come baring our eyes
through sight life brings its own
lost at last we are at fire speed
burning though the sky
bodys stealing time
you and me my friend
all is gone but us
pretend
this chariot
will sail us
to the end
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feathercut
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2005-06-12 20:01:13]
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Re: Burn out bright
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:24:41 AM AEST
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This is a very impressive write.
huggs,
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