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The ink
Contributed by
emokid
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:19:37 PM in AEST
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You're my muse
You're the ink I use
I write because I
Can't tell you how I
Feel about you too much
Words inside of my chest
Can you make it home
Or do i need to carry you
On shattered knees
And broken wings
With my blood draining
I am waiting
For an answer
Before I die
Copyright ©
emokid
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2005-06-12 22:19:37]
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Re: The ink
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:22:50 PM AEST
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i like it
good job |
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Re: The ink
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:26:17 PM AEST
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i alwas have a problem in using the word muse in my poems it never sounds right for me
but you pulled it off
great rhyme and great write |
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Re: The ink
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:27:57 PM AEST
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very strong write.
huggs,
emy
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Re: The ink
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:58:33 PM AEST
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very well written poetry and your words are very powerful.
well done! |
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Re: The ink
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:54:01 AM AEST
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I really liked the lines:
On shattered knees
And broken wings
They create really good pictures.
Take care.
David |
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