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To you
Contributed by
iamyown
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:38:42 AM in AEST
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The first time i saw you. You were a light to my eyes.
A light which ive never felt or seen in my all my life.
So i took a chance and sat in that chair.
Pleading with god that you'd care.
And seeing your eyes beauty in which words cant compare.
That night to me was heaven, but it was gone with you when i woke up at 7.
I paced my mind left and right.
Hoping when i got back you'd write.
The way we met sure was strange.
But now that im back things have changed.
You told me your dreams And all that they mean.
I let mine slip year after year, cuz i never had a voice like yours ringing in my ear.
The things i say i know are not wanted, but im sorry girl my past is haunted.
I hope we can work through it and get by, cuz girl we'll never know unless we try.
Whatever happens after this write. Just know we'll always have that night
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iamyown
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Re: To you
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:45:57 AM AEST
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Well I don't know who you is but this is a dynomite write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: To you
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:54:01 AM AEST
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Nice write...heartfelt. I hope you get your girl...
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Re: To you
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by mindset on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:35:10 PM AEST
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Look within it's our only sin yet many say to be the free and find the female I say forever for those so close for some and never for the few...
There's words inside Iamyown yet to come through I feel a free word to flow and words of gold to be.. |
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Re: To you
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by mindset on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:25:40 PM AEST
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nice
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