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Fallen idle
Contributed by
boobiepeach
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:36:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sunset on a hero
Now is no more
Cape has been thrashed
Boots torn
Fist to palm
Palm now faced down
Why should he fight?
For will there is none
Walks in the night
But saves not a one
Sleeve of tricks empty
Holsters are bare
Given to helpless
Walk with head down
In place of a smile
Now lives a frown
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boobiepeach
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2005-06-13 12:36:10]
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Re: Fallen idle
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:53:09 PM AEST
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| I like it! You rock! |
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Re: Fallen idle
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:59:10 PM AEST
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Nice. I like this one...Kind of makes me think of someone you've put on a pedestal, and have just sadly discovered their not worthy...
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Re: Fallen idle
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 09:20:42 AM AEST
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Idolize
Fantaize
Realize
He was no prize
Good write
I liked the bounce
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