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Untitled
Contributed by
UrAllEyeAm1205
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 01:07:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Cut me open
Spill my guts
And just expect me
To sew myself shut
That's what you do
When our lips meet
But before it's love
You just retreat
Am I your mistake
Or just your one night stand?
Cause it's hard enough for you to smile at me
Let alone touch my hand.
And if I am
What would you do?
I've caught your lie
And I've deserted you
But don't say you'll be fine
I know you better than that
When I'm gone, you miss me
Cause I have the one thing you lack
Love...
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2005-06-13 13:07:28]
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Re: Untitled
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by Spike on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 03:25:53 AM AEST
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Hmmm. strong and raw feelings from a wounded heart. Love and lust are ambiguous feelings at any time,and you have captured the heartache and anger well.
Spike
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