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words of stone
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 01:28:49 PM in AEST
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political
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i had a dream where i saw the world threw a childs eyes
the hate and fear so strong i tried to hide
but the death and pain and the screams kept me still
i saw children dying and people getting rich
i saw goverments fall and others rise in strength
i tried to shield my eyes put the visions grew stronger
i saw addiction and famin i saw killing over land
i yelled and threw a word hoping to smash this world
i threw my fist at the vision
smash
i thought i had a dream where i saw the world threw childs eyes
but it was my tv
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2005-06-13 13:28:49]
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Re: words of stone
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by heartbroken4ever on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 01:34:33 PM AEST
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I like this it's very good
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Re: words of stone
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by UnmovedMover on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 12:34:14 PM AEST
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6th line put should be but
7th line famin should be famine
11th line threw should be through
Considering the lack of punctuation these might be, and very possibly are, intentional errors, but, if not, you're welcome. |
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