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Double Exposure
Contributed by
Willofree
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:30:21 PM in AEST
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You've got a photograph, hey that's of me
I hope there weren't many of these
The negatives are incriminating
Fortunately, numerous were double exposures
Oh, Oh, they managed to obtain one good set of prints
We'll have to develop a plan, to establish my innocence
Circumstances are not just black and white, for instance
I must make adjustments to better focus
Without a clear picture, there is no evidence
It might be a frame-up, hope I don't get shot
The scene reflects with a glare
So I can't focus on what is out there
A film formed over my lens
Consequently, I see best when I close my eyes and visualize
Less distortion as I shutter with facing the possibilities
There is a risk of over exposure, with pictures of evidence
Most turned out well, except mine, what a coincidence
Must reload to get another angle
Perhaps a telephoto lens will provide more clarity
They just informed me, they found one worth framing
Oh No!
Copyright ©
Willofree
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Re: Double Exposure
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:14:51 PM AEST
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Heehee. I like the end of this.
I'm sorta lost with the poem though. I'm kinda wondering what you did that was so incriminating...
I like the stye though. It has a flow all of its own.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Double Exposure
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:09:59 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Double Exposure
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:32:02 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the humor. UhOh, here they come with the frame. lololol
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Re: Double Exposure
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:41:07 PM AEST
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LOL..I enjoyed this, Will..Thank you dor sharing it...
Jenni |
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Re: Double Exposure
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:26:10 PM AEST
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| i know someone that doesnt like their picture taken because they dont want to be remembered. i cant say i liked the hey, and the oh oh. this is different and i think that i rather like the way you write the way you usually do better. plus me and humorous poems just dont get along. |
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Re: Double Exposure
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:18:31 PM AEST
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Hahaha! very nice poem.. i kept wondering throughout the whole thing what the picture was all about.. and why it was so incriminating. I liked it a lot cause it had a good sense of humour and allowed open ended interpretations.
good write
dw |
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