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a place called home
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:24:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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There is a place
that im yearning for
i refer to it as home
the thing is
my house is
nothing of the sort
my home is a place
with a guy to love
my home is a place
where it is summer every day
my home is a place
where my bed is a cloud
This is a place where
the sun allways shines
and we walk on warm sand
everyone lives on the lake
and i can allways hang with my friends
here there is no difficulty
home is a place
where i dont have
to worry about my brother
and where he loves me
like i allways have him
home is a place where
no one i care about
wastes their love
on someone who is not worthy
and you always know when they are
home is a place
where there are no drugs
and i would see my
uncle marty everyday
and he would still be sane
home is a place
where i would know
my grandfather
insted of his drinking habits
this place called home
is a place in my dreams
often my mind wanders here
and i realise it would never happen
because it is a perfect place
and nothing is perfect
not in this world at least
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Re: a place called home
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by Arden on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:55:37 PM AEST
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"and i realise it would never happen
because it is a perfect place
and nothing is perfect
not in this world at least"
You know, that is very true. i can tell this is a very personal poem and i am glad that you shared it. :)
the wording needs to be touched up a bit and your english needs work, but i'm just nit-picking. its what i do lol.
i liked this. well done, keep it up.
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Re: a place called home
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:31:24 AM AEST
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Awesome masterpeice of truth.
huggs,
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