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Journey to Nowhere
Contributed by
suprasurfer
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In me there is love
But there also is hate
The disire to be lazy
And potential to be great
Ripping me in two
As the opposites fight
As I weather the battle
Im both darkness and light
Known but unseen
Through this mask I wear
Filled with so much hope
While im plauged with despair
As I endlessly search
For the seeds not yet sewn
In the fields undiscovered
I shall battle the unknown
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2005-06-14 00:51:42]
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Re: Journey to Nowhere
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:52:28 AM AEST
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well done, very emotional write & i really liked the ending, very well written.
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Re: Journey to Nowhere
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:04:19 AM AEST
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Short but deep. Great write!
--amanda-- |
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