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fallen angels
Contributed by
angel0317
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:20:50 AM in AEST
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fallen angels bleed on the ground
trampled by those who don't know
those who are ignorant and shallow
those whose feelings hover at the surface
never knowing the pain they are causing
angels with demons eating at their souls
float invisably by, ignored by others
while piece by piece they are destroyed
blank and ordinary on the outside
bloody, torn and hurt inside
soon it will be too late
to ever save these angels
death draws nearer everyday
when there gone, people may notice, but will not care
clinging to those they love
where they will go, no one knows
hell, heaven, purgatory, to space and back
but please let it take the pain away
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2005-06-14 11:20:50]
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Re: fallen angels
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:38:05 AM AEST
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| this is deep.. very well written |
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Re: fallen angels
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by Faust on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 07:44:20 PM AEST
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A very good write but it feels a little drawn out. It's still a great poem though.
Eternally Punished,
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