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Je Veux
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
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Tout les monde est heureux
Avec les personnes dans ses vie
Mais je ne suis pas heureux
Avec rien dans ma vie
Je veux de vivre dans les mondes mistique
Je veux de flier avec des comtes
Je veux de voir les toiles dans son tache
Je veux despoir, daimer, de rire avec plaisir
Mon vie est rempli de paine
Je perdrai ses illusions
Je suis un disgrce de mon famille
Mais je ne peux pas faire quelque chose
Je veux dtre une avec lunivers
Je veux de connatre ltonnement de monde
Je veux davoir un esprit ouvert
Je veux despoir, daimer, de rire avec plaisir
Vie, quelle un mot drle
Si vous cherchez quil est sens
a veut dire que nous faisons
Ou a veut dire que nous aimons
Je veux dcouter de les mythes
Je veux de parler avec des lutins
Je veux de rencontrer les fes
Je veux despoir, daimer, de rire avec plaisir
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Re: Je Veux
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 03:08:20 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is so pretty...j'adore lol...i love that line 'i want to hope, to love, to smile with pleasure' ...ooh it's so pretty... |
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Re: Je Veux
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by OreO on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 03:21:55 PM AEST
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Oh now see this is soooooooooo beautiful, it's so full of Je's and veux's.....and oh the beautiful lines in t his are breathtaking......lol it truly is beautiful even tho i cannot understand a word of it *sniffles* i knew i shoulda took french? that is what this is i think which happens to be one of the most beautifullllllest languages ever, i shoulda learned this.......You write beautiful my freind therefore i know this poem is beautiful, well it's beautiful just the way it is even though i cannot read it because this language is beautiful....thank you my friend for posting this but i wanna know what it says i do i do i do i do *pouts* hehe...and by tha way where in the world have you been, i have missed seeing you here...don't be running off no more lol......
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Re: Je Veux
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by Chenobi on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 02:25:01 PM AEST
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| I don't know if you speak French with the mother of your tongues, but you've put beautiful passion into this by simply writing down what you want. I frequently listen to foreign music, just because it's different from a language that you understand. With foreign language you just hear the tunes and the accents. It makes it different. It's the same with your poem. I think that if someone does not speak French, they would still find it beautiful, simply because it reflects the emotion you've put into it. You should write more in French.You have a nice mind. |
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