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Damaged Roses
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I waited until dawn.
You did not show.
I sat quietly on the cold bench,
Watching the oncoming trains as they passed
me by...
You never came.
The stars came out and I found the Constellations,
that you an me made up
on that quiet saturday evening.
People passed by and I watched them falling in love,
getting their hearts broken,
And being alone...
And wondered,
Which one was I?
There were wild roses growing nearbye,
and I picked a few for you,
Like you did once for me,
But I suppose I should have checked my emotions
first,
They now lie torn at my feet,
I still have the petals,
But I don't believe that they are for you.
I waited till dawn for you,
You did not show...
I'm not exactly certain why....
But perhaps it's better if I just walk away from this...
Perhaps it's just as well I never know.
DNB
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ForeverAndADay
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2005-06-14 17:10:10]
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Re: Damaged Roses
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by MorningGlory on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:41:39 PM AEST
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Hauntingly beautiful.
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Re: Damaged Roses
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:19:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful title I didn't like the poem so much, kind of hard to understand.. maybe its just me.
Keep writing,
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Re: Damaged Roses
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:36:40 PM AEST
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| I thought it was good. I understood it and I feel ya! |
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