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My Tears
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My 15 years Filled with painful tears These tears I shed not You have to learn a lot These tears are dry For I do not cry I wipe them away Every single day I rather not let them fall I would rather crawl Than cry anytime I would rather sigh Than cry Id rather die These tears I hate to see Come out of me So tears I see not Give it all Ive got To prevent them from flowing Im stopping them slowly End them before they begin That is my life plan Hide them all Dont cry when I fall You ask what Is the cause of that? When my friend Let us end I have to act strong Pretend Im getting along Fine without him Pretend that I can live Without that friend that would Do anything he could To make me feel better Now without even a letter He threw me in the rain Left me to my pain So I will seem tough Even though its rough I wont cry Instead, Ill just say bye
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Re: My Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:38:23 PM AEST (User
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this is so emotional adn expressive.I can relate a lot to this,im going through the smae,and have been for as long as i can remember,i doubt itll ever heal.I understand you too.t/c and keep your head up.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: My Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by brittaney on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:59:53 PM AEST (User
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Awww this is so emotional. I know exactly how this is, im 15 myself. Just have faith in God. Good write.
Brittaney~ |
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Re: My Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:33:23 PM AEST (User
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I'm so sorry! AWW this made me cry! but now i don't really want to.. if you can stay strong through that I need to stay strong through your poem. This was Amazing! Please keep writing!
*5 stars (add puncuation, my only advice)
--amanda-- |
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