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The Nothingness
Contributed by
masked_man
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 08:52:09 PM in AEST
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Some pray to your fictitious tale
as if you so exist,
Though never a sign of benevolence seen,
still some persist
A bitten fruit? The cause for this hell,
Bitterly absurd -
Blasphemy reigning free
despite the written word
Some pray to you in hopes that when
they die their lives will be complete,
and join you above in a vision of grandeur...glorified defeat.
Above the clouds - your far off land
beckoning all below,
In search of something,
but soon they will know:
Nothing but love,
Nothing but peace,
Nothing but happiness,
Nothing, Nothing, Nothing
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Re: The Nothingness
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:20:27 PM AEST
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You almost had me convinced masked man..
'till the end, where I think you contradict yourself in many a way.. by saying:
"In search of something,
but soon they will know:
Nothing but love,
Nothing but peace,
Nothing but happiness,"
but then you try to finalize your blasphemy with:
"Nothing, Nothing, Nothing"
(scratches head confusedly)
so which is it.. huh?
tell me.. which is it..
Respectfully Yours..
M.O.H.
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Re: The Nothingness
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by Masked_Man on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:28:16 PM AEST
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thank you for your comment MOH.
allow me to explain:
by knowing that there is nothing is to know love peace and happiness. its sort of an ironic twist of fate.
feel free to private message me if any further questions arise.
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Re: The Nothingness
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:30:49 PM AEST
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Interesting write. Interesting angle. Thanks for sharing and welcome to the site if no one has offered a welcome yet!
Carol |
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Re: The Nothingness
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:11:34 PM AEST
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powerfully written and to the point, yet still a bit of ambiguity in the last stanza.
i enjoyed this poem greatly.
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Re: The Nothingness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:45:32 AM AEST
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| Glad I ran into your poem.. if we could know and see everything, do everything.. we would all be Gods.. No reason for a prophesy to be fulfilled, and no where to go after this experience on earth.. On the way to hell, I sure hope the road is blocked.. and a detour sign reads.. this way to heaven.. lol.. anyway, yep, I figured out the meaning to your wonderful poem.. the who, what, where and why.. and ... how I pray we all make it, and no one is left behind.. Satan and his little angels have no bodies.. they aint getting mine.. Horray for the second coming!! We could all use a second chance.. Raquel Leah.. |
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