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Our life entwined
Contributed by
foxfire44
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Will you love me today?
As promised all those many yesterdays
Will you forever stay?
As I become old and gray
Will your heart still beat with mine?
As the bloom of youth looses its shine
Will you always be there?
As men of my life, showing you care
Will joy still fill our lives?
As we watch the years go by
Will it always be this way?
As a love that will never stray
Will our love always survive?
As one soul together entwined
Will heaven be so kind?
As not to leave one behind
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2005-06-14 21:45:29]
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Re: Our life entwined
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by discantbelife on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:03:47 PM AEST
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| Ahhh just beautiful..especially the last lines..amazing..good job |
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Re: Our life entwined
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:25:39 PM AEST
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Age doesn't factor in with true love and friendship. True love doesn't see the aging process. It only sees the goodness and kindess, love and faithfulness and respect given by each partner. The answer is no, not if your partner truly loves you.
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Re: Our life entwined
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by Sherah on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:32:35 AM AEST
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| This is another great poem by you..... Keep up the great work... your writing is getting stronger.... |
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