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Unreachable
Contributed by
Rockloser169
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:00:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I feel as if youre so far away
Almost unreachable
Every time I think of you I smile to myself
I love to hear your voice
It makes me be in a trance that makes me smile
Every time I talk to you I hope you say something
But sadly you dont
I just want you to know that Ill wait
Ill wait for the day youre ready to tell me
That when you think of me you smile
I cant wait until the day I hear
When you hear my voice your in a trance
Sometimes I wish I could just tell you how I feel
But I know you wouldnt like that
You know everything about me
And that hurts me
It hurts
I feel so vulnerable when Im a round you
I feel when Im with you theres no one else
Sometimes I wish I could hug and kiss you forever
But youre still Unreachable
One day you wont be and on that day
Ill tell you that when I saw you I smiled
When you said hello
I fell in your trance
And Ill wait for you to tell me the same
But Ill have to wait for that day
They day I finally see you
My guy
The perfect guy
The unreachable
Copyright ©
Rockloser169
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2005-06-14 22:00:17]
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Re: Unreachable
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by discantbelife on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:05:10 PM AEST
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| Deep i love it...i think we all feel this at times |
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Re: Unreachable
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:10:04 PM AEST
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WOW!!!
I loved this you really portrayed your emotions , and thoughts beautifully and with such honesty
Leia |
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Re: Unreachable
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:55:36 PM AEST
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| good write. i really like the end. |
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Re: Unreachable
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:51:51 PM AEST
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| man, this si deep, this is like grammy worthy, if , ya know, I acknowladged teh grammys as somthign worthwile instead of as an insult to true musicians everywere. |
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