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an everyday thing
Contributed by
unluckicharmz
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:49:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Bad signs
dark rooms
avoiding waking up
pleading with myself to just fall back asleep
but my thoughts keep me up
i wish for a day i could count of you
i dream for the day when i could make it through
call me a slut one more time
i sware ill leave this place
ill never come back; ill never call
you'll never see my face again!
you cut off my friends so i have no one else to talk to
you want me miserable
but i wont cry again for you
so leave me alone
i dont want to wake
someone, please help me
get me out of this place
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2005-06-15 08:49:11]
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Re: an everyday thing
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by Arden on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:06:34 AM AEST
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well i know what your going thru. mothers can be royal b*tches. and well, it does hurt the most when its one or both of your parents that treat you in such a way.
good expressive poem. it was written kinda simple, but still good.
keep it up.
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Re: an everyday thing
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by brittaney on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:45:29 PM AEST
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I know EXACTLY what you mean. Mom's can be a little over protective. Im 15 and me and my mom dont exactly always get along either. Basically, what I do is I always just think you only have a couple more years and then it will all be over. Besides, your mom probably just wants to do whats right for you, even though it might not be in your opinion. All she wants is to keep you safe from any harm because she loves you deep dow. If you ever need to talk, Im here, and I understand. Hope it gets better!
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