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Piece of Peace
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:38:42 AM in AEST
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There is a way out
The advantage to solving the riddle
To berate and humiliate
To belittle
Connecting the pieces of the puzzle
A lust so tasteful
I remediate
My libido so instinctual
Detected your presence
From across the room
You were in essence
All the dreams
I once consumed
Combined in a solitude
Singularly
Production of meshed film
The images so brightly
Diffused
Filtered the energy
Disproportionately misused
Distorted
Form a once strong
Clearly
And inspiringly
Virtuous wrong
Eager willingness
To never do any harm
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-06-15 10:38:42]
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Re: Piece of Peace
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by expired_promises on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:15:56 AM AEST
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| nice write.......your words are chosen wisely and create the mood well |
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Re: Piece of Peace
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by MorningGlory on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:09:20 PM AEST
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I loved reading your poem, it flowed very well.
I really liked your use of words. |
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Re: Piece of Peace
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:22:36 PM AEST
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Nice bit of storytelling there Jyss...Well done!!
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