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endless fear
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 04:21:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Towers of light
Gracefull day
God lye still
in the sky's fill
Blooming faith
sucked from the spine
carry your way
For your hunger, divine
mornings of youth
awakening soul
with the set comes our truth
behold
Im writing my time
my eyes speak in ink
in blacker than black of the night
found lost
In your grace
i sink
There is a light
a love, a dream
where our bodies forget
loss is lost in the seam
as our bodies connect
love mothers our souls
crying into the room
she sings us
to sleep
In a violent night
I am set to the sea
abandoning love
god has set me free
And in his honesty i lay
banished from the day
my womb
" come mama" i serenade
my answer
a tomb
Towers of light
graceful day
God lye still
In the sky's fill
Blooming faith
sucked from the spine
carry the way
for your hunger
divine.....
my oath:
I will plant the seeds
bring the axe
take the way
never look back
Ive got what i need
the storm is here
and i will promise myself
endless
fear.
Copyright ©
feathercut
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2005-06-15 16:21:56]
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Re: endless fear
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:12:20 PM AEST
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| I just thought I would give you a comment.I'm not the perfect poet, but I think that this poem could use some help. I really didn't understand it. It's like you were all over the place talking about alot of things, but nothing relates to each other.. |
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