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Summer Joy
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:44:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Holding my breath
Gazing in the camp
Sweat softly marking my face
With their salty trails
Glancing around the familiar grounds
For that one familiar face
That always draws me back
I only come because of him
His laugh, his smile,
All bringing me to this place
Every day I watch him
Study him, adore him
And every night I dream of him
See him, pray for his affection
Yet at the end of every break
He notices me not
Just like all the other times
But I still go to camp
Just to see
My summer joy
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2005-06-15 17:44:37]
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Re: Summer Joy
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by highly_flammable on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:42:18 PM AEST
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| That's really sweet. A very good write. I like the detail you put into your poem. Keep it up! |
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