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Last Breath
Contributed by
highly_flammable
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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As I inhale, the pain grows
With every breath I take
I stumble along, weakening
And I leave tears in my wake
I see the blood drip down
But now I can not feel
I'm numb with grief and fear
None of this seems real
I stumble and then I fall
So I lay on the hard ground
Glistening tears mixing with dirt
Now I'm just wishing to be found
And as my blood spreads around me
I remember my friends faces and smile
I relive all the good times we had
Don't think I'll be seeing them for a while
Bitter tears flood down my face
As the pain reaches an excruciating height
I wish someone was here with me
Watching as my soul takes flight
I hear the crunch of feet on leaves
And look up to see your face
You ask why, but even I don't know
I'm gathered up in your embrace
Your tears are now mixed with mine
You hold me and say I make you whole
I touch your face and say I love you
Your love has redeemed my soul
You cry harder, still not letting go
And you whisper back I love you too
My last breath leaves my broken body
As for the last time I look up at you
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Re: Last Breath
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:33:41 PM AEST
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| Im really tearing up...very emotional..and dark. Wet with love and pain. great write. luv it! |
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Re: Last Breath
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by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:38:48 PM AEST
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hard emotion...im tearing up just reading it...really great poem... keep it up..
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Re: Last Breath
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by grin69 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:24:09 PM AEST
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| Hello. This is really sad, but I like it. |
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Re: Last Breath
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:57:53 PM AEST
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wow rhi that was really good, your becoming and even better writter. i love the last verse "You cry harder, still not letting go
And you whisper back I love you too
My last breath leaves my broken body
As for the last time I look up at you" it just flows so nicley. i love you ttyl see you tomorrow
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Re: Last Breath
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:58:18 PM AEST
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wow rhi that was really good, your becoming and even better writter. i love the last verse "You cry harder, still not letting go
And you whisper back I love you too
My last breath leaves my broken body
As for the last time I look up at you" it just flows so nicley. i love you ttyl see you tomorrow
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