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Learn To Let Go
Contributed by
justintears
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:17:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Heaven's lost grace
Is straining my eyes
Embracing compassion
In earthly goodbyes
The glimpse of the moment
How softly she shined
A tearful illusion
Left sorrowed eyes blind
It's become hard to smile
And hurts so to breathe
But i'm trying to cope with
And dying to bleed
Her trust was a lie
My tears must bestow
In times of despair
You learn to let go
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2005-06-15 18:17:21]
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Re: Learn To Let Go
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:36:03 PM AEST
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| I know it is hard to let go...and for some impossible...great write. Highly emotional. Just remember...Everyone has someone they can trust. Peace to your soul |
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Re: Learn To Let Go
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:53:33 PM AEST
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I can't literally or actually think of way to describe "letting go". But you just did.
I hope you will continue to write and submit more. I think you have enormous talent, sincerely.
Kie |
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