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UNEXPLAINABLE FEALINGS
Contributed by
Mikayla
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:33:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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WHAT ARE THESE FEELINGS INSIDE, THAT I HAVE FOR YOU? I NEED TO CONFIDE, OH PLEASE,WHAT SHOULD I DO? I FEAL HMMMM.? I DONT KNOW, HOW ON EARTH DO YOU MAKE ME FEAL THIS WAY? YOU MAKE MY HEART GLOW, AND EVERYNIGHT I PRAY. PLEASE HEAR ME OUT, WHEN IM NOT WITH YOU, I AINT THE SAME, AND IT MAKES ME WANNA SHOUT! ALL THESE FEELINGS KEEP RUSHING IN, ITS SO LONG AND CONFUSING, I DONT EVEN KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN. BUT YET, I KEEP GOING BACK TO YOU, AND DOING SOMETHING THAT I USUALLY REGRET. AND YOU STILL DONT HAVE A CLUE. YOU ACT LIKE WE JUST MET. BUT, STILL I SECRETLY CRUSH UPON HIM, WISHING HE WAS MINE, I CAN GO ON AND ON AND ON ABOUT HIM MOST OR ALL OF THE TIME.
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Re: UNEXPLAINABLE FEALINGS
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by Sherah on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:31:07 PM AEST
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Sounds like you have had just a terrible time dealing with this. I sure you can get by this. About your poem, For a beginner it's not bad.
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Re: UNEXPLAINABLE FEALINGS
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:10:27 PM AEST
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Other then the caps, this is a pretty good poem for a beginner.
~Clark |
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Re: UNEXPLAINABLE FEALINGS
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by BurriedByMyLies on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 04:52:11 PM AEST
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| great poem, I think many people can relate to. Keep writting ! |
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