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Rendezvouz
Contributed by
freckle
on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 07:13:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Rendezvous
Rendezvous
just
Me
and
You
At midnight
when the night
is
young
And darkness
waits ~
to embrace
Those
who
stray
into
her
depth
She'll
hold
us
close
We
will
give
in
To
Darkness
and
the taste
of
sin
Rendezvous
just
Me
and
You
At midnight..........
Carol
Copyright ©
freckle
... [
2005-06-15 19:13:27]
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Re: Rendezvouz
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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| so carol, why do you use onle one word in a lot of lines? i just cant really see the point of it, unless its to make the poem seem longer. ::shrugs:: i liked how the ending rephrased the beginning very much so. |
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Re: Rendezvouz
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:06:52 AM AEST
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cute write like the rhytum 2 it nice lead to the end . . .
Ben |
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Re: Rendezvouz
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:32:53 PM AEST
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I can fully appreciate the form and composition..
creative enough to gather response, is the whole idea behind art in my opinion.
I liked it.
B |
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Re: Rendezvouz
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:03:07 AM AEST
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*is dissagreeing with E9 again. lol*
I like the one word thing...it makes the poem fast, and strong.
I think this flows well.
Great words hun.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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