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NOt sure
Contributed by
nick_is_no_poet
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:30:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Ever wakeing day i realize what is there
right in front of my eyes but i feel compelled to tell someone, to break out,
but i have no choice but to keep it all inside and hope that one day
she will realize my secret must be kept and cannot be found
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nick_is_no_poet
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2005-06-15 22:30:31]
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Re: NOt sure
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:54:44 AM AEST
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's got the makings of a good poem. Verse it up a bit more and perhaps use some rhyme.
Hope you enjoy my comment
Jordan :o) |
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