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my escape
Contributed by
pony
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:48:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Look at the red flow
dripping oh so slow.
Sharp pain in the first slice
making myself pay the price.
Tears form in my eyes
remembering all those lies.
everything goes completely numb
i know this crap is dumb.
I have nothing left to live for
im empty all the way to the core.
emotions are what i lack
i know for sure ill never get you back.
You killed me inside
now hell is where ill preside.
you werent there when i needed you
i dont think what you said was even true.
if you loved me whyd you go
you brought me to an all time low.
im sick of caring
this razor is daring.
Looking up at me
as shiny as can be.
go ahead its your turn
go to hell die and burn.
it keeps taunting me
you'll feel better, see?
deeper and deeper they get
a new record i set.
Copyright ©
pony
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2005-06-15 23:48:13]
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Re: my escape
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:54:42 AM AEST
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Sad to the core but awesomly written.
huggs, strength, prayer,
emy |
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Re: my escape
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by upomik on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:50:51 AM AEST
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| hi. you don't know me and i don't know you. but through your poem i understand how you feel. i've been there many times. most of my poems are on the same format. let me know how you get over this because i would love to try it myself. keep writing. it was really good. only through writing can a person tell one's true feelings and thoughts that can't be expressed verbally. |
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