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Leave Me Alone If This Is Life
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:18:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Just leave me alone
Alone in my thoughts
Trapped in the zone
Where everything is possible,
And nothing, is not.
Leave me alone
While I'm forced to watch
People that lie
And memories
That cause me to cry.
Just leave me alone
Alone in my room
Away from the people who wish they were dead,
Away from their veins that were cut
And just bled.
Leave me alone
To listen to lies and people's losses
To feel people's broken hearts, and
Shattered dreams.
Just leave me alone,
If life,
Is really what it seems.
Copyright ©
xXcrossedXx
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Re: Leave Me Alone If This Is Life
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:50:52 AM AEST
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Why worry and bother you if life is pointless already huh...tats a great poem, Great job, As Always
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Re: Leave Me Alone If This Is Life
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:09:49 PM AEST
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| first stanza is the best in this piece, your ending, second. the first stanza is the best because it simply put me off my rocker enough to actually read a new concept, that the ending just couldnt compare. your ending would have put me off my rocker, but too bad that already happened =] |
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Re: Leave Me Alone If This Is Life
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 10:00:47 PM AEST
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| Bravo! I really loved this poem! The idea of living through others' experiences, and from those becoming disillusioned yourself. What a truly amazing idea, and so well crafted too! It's just so impressive! I want to say this is one of my favorites, if not my absoulte favorite, by you so far. I love the way you convey all these concepts of life and happiness and fear and death and just..so much else in all your poems. This one was just so beautifully strong and it just had a spectacular ending that really made this poem *that* much better. Just so impressive, amazing work! Just amazing! |
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Re: Leave Me Alone If This Is Life
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:09:01 PM AEST
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Great job Amanda...This expresses some things I'm feeling at the moment. Excellent display of emotions. That first stanza is so bitterly real...Well done!!
Scorp. |
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