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Tragedy Met Me Today... And I Feel... Nothing
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:58:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my shadow is my only friend
and when i burn out all my candles
he envelops me
surrounds me
swallows me
with his warmth
inhaling him ive tried to enjoy
but im left empty
on neutral
without the breaks
to end my constant work cycle
of surviving my life
is this my endeavor
to follow my own footsteps
into the obvious
right before my eyes
it lies to me
it lays in front of me
it listens to my agony in my sleep
my shadow
my other side
my only friend
my one companion that never leaves me
until i burn out all my candles
there it is
welcome darkness
my new friend
my new shadow...
or lack there of......
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abnormalpunk
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2005-06-16 08:58:32]
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Re: Tragedy Met Me Today... And I Feel... Nothing
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:09:43 AM AEST
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| very cool :D |
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Re: Tragedy Met Me Today... And I Feel... Nothing
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by imagenuinefake on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:30:49 AM AEST
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| Such a pretty poem. I love it. Loverly talents. |
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Re: Tragedy Met Me Today... And I Feel... Nothing
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by Elfie on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:30:50 AM AEST
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| I like this, I feel this way sometimes. |
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Re: Tragedy Met Me Today... And I Feel... Nothing
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:07:26 PM AEST
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Unique. I like this look at loneliness.
Rita |
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Re: Tragedy Met Me Today... And I Feel... Nothing
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:17:49 PM AEST
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Great expression in this write...Well done!
Scorp. |
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Re: Tragedy Met Me Today... And I Feel... Nothing
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by russ-dawg on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 06:52:18 AM AEST
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| i like this one it kind of describes the way i feel some times way wicked! |
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