|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lost To Voices
Contributed by
sride686
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:40:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Demons live with in my mind
They speak to me in riddles and rimes
They move threw out my mind
Never to be seen before this time
My thoughts are clear as I see their trance
They had me lost the first time I glanced
But now its clear I see them move
now with in my mind its them I choose
Their words that comfort my darkest soul
Left alone these voices take control
They give me hope and give me faith
No longer alone Ive found my place
Death, hate and greed voice begin to bread
Bread my hate and a painful lust
But my eyes are shut in this lustful rush
Blinded by their greed as these riddles begin to breath
They breath their rimes as they inter my mind
They rip me apart never to depart
I found it now my source of pain
But now that I have them Ive gone insane
I grit my teeth on every word
And start to hate this life Ive learned
Now I need some strength before they take control
For I see my future and my pass
And this breath I breath will be my last
~Steve~
Copyright ©
sride686
... [
2005-06-16 12:40:10]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lost To Voices
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:30:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This poem is Dark .. It's writen ok but needs some help..... |
|
|
Re: Lost To Voices
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You really dug deep with this one Steve. Love the depth of expression in this write...A few spelling errors though, just double check next time...Still, you manage to get your point across...Nicely done.
Scorp. |
|
|
Re: Lost To Voices
(User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:20:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nice write steve honest and firm in conviction
Ben |
|
|
Re: Lost To Voices
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 07:16:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
WOW Steve
Very different to the type of poetry i have read so far. It definately portrayes a very different side to life and i can appreciate that. I think you did a really good job. I like it that you write with pure honesty.Just don't forget about the happiness in life.
Thinking of you, Tara |
|
|
Re: Lost To Voices
(User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:00:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very deep dear...very....you might like my poem The Voice So Distant From Us...
if your mind is curious please take a peak at my work....and express yourself....
summer |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
