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Sacred Death
Contributed by
Shnyzz
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:02:46 PM in AEST
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Seen a shooting star today,
Rending through the distance,
Even though twas far away,
I witnessed its existence,
Empyreal at first sight,
Draining away my breath,
Just out by chance tonight,
I witnessed a sacred death,
Propitious was the time,
I couldn't help but smile,
Preparing this simple rhyme,
My thoughts versatile,
Lost within my mind,
I gazed into the sky,
Enjoying this subtle find,
This quiet way to die,
Trickling through the dark,
Bothering no one as its goes,
I still managed to see this spark,
So to you I must repose.
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Shnyzz
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2005-06-16 20:02:46]
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Re: Sacred Death
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by Sherah on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:38:37 PM AEST
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| Good Poem..... Keep up the Good work!! |
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Re: Sacred Death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 07:08:09 PM AEST
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Hello:
Amazing at it may seem, your vivid writing allowed me to see the description of your shooting star.
Sometimes we are that very shooting star.. model of the universe that will also die.. yet hoping our spark goes on eternally..
Thank you for the beautiful write..
Yours Truly,
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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