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no more
Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:14:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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im sad
bc i know
things between us
are no longer
i dont feel
sorrow anymore
i know all this
happened for a reason
all i ask of you
is that you dont
forget me
not yet
if in the future
we see each other
in our new lifes
i will look at you
and remember
everything
how we understood each other
how true our love was
my only fear
is that
you wont remember
or remember me
i will never forget you
my one and only love
i hope you have a good life
bye
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Re: no more
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 05:48:56 PM AEST
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this was more of a farewell from a feeling than anything else - a lovely poem - i really liked the structure of the piece i felt6 it made it very readabl;e and the overal theme was one of love being remembered yet physically it has left maybe?!?
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