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To the Father I Love
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:52:46 PM in AEST
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To the Father who raised me
And taught me well
To the nurturer who cared for me
Who supported me
Who rocked me in his arms until I fell
Asleep
Without a peep
He would sing me a song
I knew so well
To the Father who cared
Who always showed his face
Who pretended it didnt hurt him
When I chose to live in outer-space
When I chose to run
And leave without a trace
After he begged me to stay
A tear rolled down my face
To my one Father
I make my amends
The words spoken out loud
Dont compare to this page and pen
This sacred bond
A bond amongst men
The unconditional love
That sets us, completely apart from them
To the Father I love
To the hero I envy
To the master of family
And the promoter of unity
A single entity
With your wife,
My mother
By your side
The world is your oyster
On its wave you will ride
On a fathers day so special
I beg you to stand up with pride
And look all around you
See yourself from the inside
Realize what you mean
And how important you have been
Think about the lives you have touched
And the wisdom you impart within
My future engraved in my blood
The genes of my father
The Father I love
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jyssvw22
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Re: To the Father I Love
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:07:04 PM AEST
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What a touching poem. I hope you give this to him. Beautiful write!
--amanda-- |
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Re: To the Father I Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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*stands up and claps like crazy* Bravo!! I love it jyss!! It's beautiful, and I hope you're going to give this to him on Sunday....Hmmm where did you get this idea from?? LOL Geez..not fair...now I have to try to compete with this beauty?!?! Great job.
Scorp. |
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Re: To the Father I Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:16:51 PM AEST
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This is a peice to stand up and salate.
I know your father is very proud of this write and u too.
I've never seen a masterpeice as this is, before.
happy fathers day to u both.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: To the Father I Love
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:40:30 PM AEST
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*applauds with Scorp*
I love this. What a loving and gorgeous tribute to your father.
This is the nicest fathers day poem I have seen so far.
Awesome write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: To the Father I Love
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by HoPeFuLtKn on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:21:41 PM AEST
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| WOW! May I add another great write. Nice choice of words. |
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Re: To the Father I Love
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:36:59 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was very sweet. I hope he knows how special he is to you and how lucky he is. Good job! |
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