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Incomplete
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:28:37 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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I dont know what to do
you use to brighten up my day
but since you are gone
now apart of me is dying inside
That dying wonders why would you leave
without you my heart can never rest
my heart is nothing more than an empty shell
I pray for my heart not to be broken
but without in my life
I dont have any air to breathe
without you in my world
My life will always be incomplete
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jmpy84
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2005-06-16 22:28:37]
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Re: Incomplete
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:35:21 AM AEST
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A sad but honest write straight from the heart, but don't give up hope try and heal and
then get ready for the next go round who knows your miss right may be looking for you
cause like you some one broke her heart avery nice write though . . .
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Re: Incomplete
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:58:16 PM AEST
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we all maybe feel incomplete sometimes...but never give up
i like this poem...it's honest and full of emotion...great write!
- Beth - |
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