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My Fear
Contributed by
Rikki
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:40:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My mind has escalated
Through gaps of furious statements.
Reminiscing on past memories,
No one remembers me.
Chaos, they said,
It's all in your head, you're not dead.
I'm still around, still not found,
Love is still on the bound,
Pounded to the ground, astounded
At all the things I have to endure.
The pure, the weak.
I speak but can't hear.
My fear remains the same,
It's a game I can't quit.
I won't get noticed till I'm gone.
It's wrong.
I gotta get on.
Copyright ©
Rikki
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2005-06-16 22:40:10]
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Re: My Fear
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by nhisname2005 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:43:48 PM AEST
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| wow.. first words that came to me after I read your words. Another would be a scripture in the bible that says this.. I did not give you the spirit of fear. So if God didn't give you the spirit of fear, who did.. who would want you to live in fear.. The devil.. so I like your poem cause it brought alot out of me.. thanks.. sandy |
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Re: My Fear
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:16:43 PM AEST
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Very powerfull writing.
huggs,
emy |
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