|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Dreaming
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:32:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
Down the hill I tumble
The ground below me starts to crumble
It's all starting to fade away
I want so badly just to stay
I don't want to leave you behind
Cause when I wake you'll be on my mind
Just let me sleep & dream of this place
Where I can still touch his sweet face
As long as I'm sleeping he's still here
I can still see him so clear
Please don't wake me
Please don't take me
From my one & only
When I wake I'll again be lonely
Please don't take me away again
For now this is all I have of him
Copyright ©
living_dead_girl
... [
2005-06-16 23:32:29]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Dreaming
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:51:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great wirte full of longing and loving.
Your boyfriend should be very happy to have such a loving and dedicated girlfriend.
Great write
Keep writing
Keep smiling
sweetstranger |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
