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everything you want me to be
Contributed by
saved_by_the_x
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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the thing i want
is not a future
but a death trap
that i have fellen in to
everything you want
me to be
is not what my
mind sees within you
sometimes i am strong but
everything you want me to be
is not what i see
causethere is a blindness
not always to the naked eye
but to a covered herat
that has a hole
with no cure other than love
everything you want
me to be
is not what my
mind sees within you
it stay hidden to the outside
but the emotions
within cry for salvation
in my lord jesus christ
now i think i have been
everything you want me to be
now i see the light
from the the black
everything you want
me to be
is not what my
mind sees within you
~ I cryed out for salvation in my lord jesus christ on nov-20-04~
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Re: everything you want me to be
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by saved_by_the_x on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:09:40 PM AEST
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i hope some1 comes
in my poem i just started
on this web and no one
has made a comment
on none of mine so plz
tell me if i am good or if
they are just bad and i
need to stop tell me the
truth it will not hurt my
feeling i have had
people say worst well
thanks i am a nerd
cause i posted on my
own poem but i want
some 1 to tell me if
they are good
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Re: everything you want me to be
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by OnAngelswings on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:05:16 PM AEST
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| You are very lucky to found our Lord! Congradulations!!!!!!I look forward to more of your poems...You're always in my prayers....Shari :) |
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Re: everything you want me to be
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:48:52 AM AEST
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i think your poems are beautiful.
i to get frustrated when i spend a lot of time on a poem and no one comments. the pen is a good way to let out frustration as well as just every day life.
keep it up i will read!
nat |
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