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my words of sorry!
Contributed by
Boobiepeach
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Make dirty words of sole unsaid
Words I used hurt you instead
Thought the key was held by all
But key was held by just this one
I am to blame
My sole is darkened
Character questioned by owner
Words of anger taken out
Not meant to hurt you
Meant to know
Wiped the tear and watched me scream
Almost surrender to bitter
But held me with words and arms
Kind and forgiving
Help not unnoticed
Fooled myself with words of anger
Copyright ©
Boobiepeach
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2005-06-17 17:04:18]
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Re: my words of sorry!
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:29:18 PM AEST
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| Yeah that's more like it! This one is about MEEEEEEe!!! Radical Noodley! |
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Re: my words of sorry!
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 06:49:11 PM AEST
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Very fine write indeed Nat.....wonderful rhyme, and flow.........enjoyed it most of all because it seemed to console..most you of course, but that's what the pen is for!
and Welcome to the Site of YPDC Nat. it's been so nice to meet you........now that I've found your house, I'll drop by to say Hi, and encourage you like you did me OK?
Warm love
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Re: my words of sorry!
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 07:12:01 PM AEST
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we all do occasionally sink to those low levels as anger takes over. We just have to do what you did and apologize and try not to make the same mistake again. Best to ignore silly people. No matter what they tell you, crow is not very tasty.
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Re: my words of sorry!
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:29:46 PM AEST
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this was a good poem. and it's nice to apologize. and we all do let angry words slip at times, don't punish yourself to much. saying your sorry is a lot harder than letting the angry words slip. so, unlike others, you apologized. good job! keep up the good work!!
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Re: my words of sorry!
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:02:04 PM AEST
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Nicely expressed apology Peaches...I hope the person forgave you! Good job.
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