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Without You
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:39:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You are looking down
Watching us run around
Feeling hopeless without you
Wondering what we should do
Now, that youve left a hole
In all our hearts and souls
We all were left crying
Some gave up on trying
God took you to his home
Just left us on our own
You took a piece of me
And now I feel empty
My heart
Fell apart
You took a piece with you
Eric took one too
When he just ended
Our friendship
Others have snuck some pieces away
Also, I even lost a few today
Im not blaming you, Marianne
Its not like you were the one with the plan
But couldnt you tell God, please
To steps killing my friends and me
Im on my last piece of heart
And a friend holds that one hard
And I pray that he doesnt shred it
Like others did
But, all that matters is that
No matter what
You are the one I miss today
The one I missed yesterday
The one Ill miss tomorrow
In the early marrow
Its hard without you
I dont know what to do
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sprinter27
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2005-06-17 21:39:52]
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Re: Without You
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:00:07 PM AEST
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Very touching & it certainly does tear our heart and souls apart when we lose a loved friend.
Ur poem was filled with a lot of pain and grief. I hope you find peace. |
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