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Falling Stars
Contributed by
OnAngelswings
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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When a stars fall from the heavens
does it make any sound
Could it be one of Gods angels
on a mission that came down
Here to reach out and touch
someone that has needs
Or just here to help them
plant another one of Gods seeds
Maybe here to pick a person up
that just breathed his last
Taking them up to heaven
on that shooting star that goes past
So many stars up in the heavens
just waiting for a new call
Are they Gods angels up there
watching over us in case we fall
When you see a star fall from heaven
take notice and say a little prayer
That star may be on a mission
a little prayer will show how much you care
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Re: Falling Stars
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by angel_eyes70 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:10:24 PM AEST
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that poem was absoulutly AMAZING! i loved it. great write
angel_eyes70 :) |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:12:31 PM AEST
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An angelic masterpeice.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by foxfire44 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:13:52 PM AEST
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| great poem...I realy like it alot it was very touching........ |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:57:47 PM AEST
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Very sweet and inspiring.
Ur poems are very magical. XXX
God bless |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by saved_by_the_x on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:51:02 PM AEST
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| love it you have such a talent it is AmAzInG i love it keep it up you are a true blessing and you may change peoples mind on angels and god thanks alot all the love and best wishes =o) |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:13:42 PM AEST
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| Another inspiring poem. Great write...........M |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 09:36:42 AM AEST
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| This poem has nice imagery, i'm not sure about the pacing though it didn't read read fluently. Still, well done! |
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