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Out of Order
Contributed by
BlindRomantic
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:38:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Tomorrow will be better
They lie to your face,
They want you to be happy
In this perfect place.
Synthesized emotions
None of your own,
Each replaced
With feelings unknown.
This isnt life
The way it should be,
It isnt imperfect
Just full of glee.
Their world without fear
Without hate or pain,
A place of perfection
But for me, its too plain.
I need the emotions
The feelings that are mine,
You cant take them away
No matter the time.
In blissful happiness
Or in isolation,
I will forever remember
The sin and temptation.
This fashion of society
Must come to an end,
I wont partake in this life
Of horrible trends.
Families forgotten
Replaced with TV,
This fashionable beauty
Just isnt for me.
I want out of this life
To be mine own,
Out of order
Remaining alone.
Copyright ©
BlindRomantic
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2005-06-17 22:38:18]
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Re: Out of Order
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by Random on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:43:41 PM AEST
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Re: Out of Order
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 07:42:45 AM AEST
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This is an outstanding and brilliantly penned piece of poetry. I love the way u bring this across to ur reader. It's captivating from beginning to end.
I want out of this life
To be mine own,
Out of order
Remaining alone.
I can so much relate to the above mentioned.
Well done and keep up the great work.
*warm hugs*
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