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Epiphany
Contributed by
shnyzz
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:33:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sponging up the sky and stars,
Soaking my mind in time,
Clinging to what lies a far,
Reaching for what is prime,
Taking the route bathed in dust,
Fallen from heavens dew,
Glittering on the cosmic crust,
All ripples start anew,
Forming waves which always crash,
And plunge into each other,
Molding with every bash,
Each forming with the other,
Funneling up in a rush,
Entwining with the skies,
Brewing an exuberant lush,
Sparking up the whys,
Which bombard my every thought,
Fearless to explore,
Tying loose ideas into knots,
Opening up new doors.
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shnyzz
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2005-06-18 01:33:21]
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Re: Epiphany
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by Rikki on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:42:45 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write!
It almost made my lightbulb turn on!
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Re: Epiphany
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 10:55:06 PM AEST
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So many lines here that caught my eye. This was an excellent piece. I really enjoyed the rhythm of it. "Sponging up the sky and stars,
Soaking my mind in time" Loved those lines. Glad I looked in on these least read poems...some, like this DO NOT deserve to be here. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Epiphany
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by felicitous on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 06:19:10 AM AEST
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| Some fantastic lines in there. "brewing an exuberant lush" for example. Entrancing writing. |
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