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The Castle
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:52:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Open the drawbridge,let me in
Let me see what lies within
Far inside the castle deep
Where the centuries earn there keep
Ancestral portraits on the wall
All around baronial hall
Candles flicker, everywhere
Ageless scent is in the air
Logs are crackling in the fire
Sets the scene to warm, inspire
I see the staircase wide and deep
Leads upstairs to ghosts asleep
Magic memories all around
Time of ages does abound
See the armour from the past
Time is ageless, time is vast
See the table, solid, round
Mystic stone upon the ground
I will sit and feel in time
Valiant hearts, mingle with mine
Castle of a time gone by
If I close my eyes and try
I can be there, far away
To past times, another day
Arthur, master, loyal, true
Lancelot and Merlin too
Rest inside this castle strong
Where the ghosts of time belong
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-06-18 07:52:56]
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Re: The Castle
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by Inevitable on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:06:09 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, gave great elusive pictures to the mind. |
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Re: The Castle
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by bernard on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:10:32 AM AEST
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| One of the best poems that I have seen on this list. Keep them coming top narks from bernard. |
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Re: The Castle
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by bernard on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:10:46 AM AEST
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| One of the best poems that I have seen on this list. Keep them coming top marks from bernard. |
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Re: The Castle
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:17:47 PM AEST
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an amazing write.. this-
your flow is unmatched..
your imagery even better..
I really love your work.
A timeless piece indeed..
B
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Re: The Castle
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 04:50:04 PM AEST
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It's a colorful and enchanting picture you're painted here. Methinks I hear the footfall of a vivid imagination. Well done.
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