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what it'd take
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:32:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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as the days are passing
these regrets are lasting
and its so hard sometimes, the way you see my face.
smiling and proud...
when this happiness is just not my place.
four pills fall down the drain
another empty bottle
spills that leave these stains.
a knock at my door.
and i pretend im not home.
sometimes its so hard
the way you see me so alone....
smiling and proud..
when really all this time, i just need. y o u .
itd take five hundred red roses
and a
bottle of wine
to tell you my story ....
and keep you as mine.
so i'll save myself the pain
of lieing to remove the stain.
and tell you.
itd take.
another 5 pills
to relieve this pain
one more bottle
and one more stain.
cuts that leave no scars.
there only in my .. heart.
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bttrflynajar
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2005-06-18 16:32:49]
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Re: what it'd take
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:54:51 PM AEST
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Wow that left me with a sense of sadness. Good emotional sense in this. Thanks fer sharing
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Re: what it'd take
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by Drapes on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:40:31 PM AEST
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wow thats sooo good! very emotional. great write!
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