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Could...
Contributed by
unluckicharmz
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:44:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Could it get any worse
Could I let out one more cry?
Could I sit for one more second in this pain and these lies?
Could I live in this misery one more night?
Could someone take me out of this fight?
Could someone save me from all my nightmares and dreams?
Could I look you in the face and not want to scream?
Could you ever know the stuff I've been through?
Could you stop comparing your problems to mine?
Could my life end right now and stop the agony?
Could someone listen and not critize?
Could I ever look in the mirror and know I'll be fine?
Could you leave me alone for a while?
Could everyone just leave me?
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Re: Could...
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:54:56 PM AEST
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good write... i liked it. and people might not want to leave because they care about you. and i know that doesn't work... telling people to leave you alone just makes them bother you more!!! grr.... i hate it. and your life can end, but i wouldn't want it to... you're a good writer ^^^. hope it all works out for you!! keep up the good work!!
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Re: Could...
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by Wandering-Soul on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:26:05 PM AEST
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| Hm, it seems that a lot of poets on this site feel alone and helpless, and all of them express it through their work. I shall give to you what I gave to others. Be strong, I am sure a speak for everyone when I say we'll all be here for you. Good luck with your struggles. |
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