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Lost Stars
Contributed by
the_oats
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 05:29:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The moon cries out for its lost stars
Dawn awakens every breath
Hilltops light
With every ignite
Life is seen
Through day it cries
Darkness follows, goodbye, goodbye
Queen of the sky
Ruler of the night
All is clear
All is bright
In the night, all is right
For the moon has found its stars
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2005-06-18 17:29:58]
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Re: Lost Stars
(User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:15:54 PM AEST
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I guess I need to do some studies, cos I am confused about this poem, it is bueatul to me, but you called it a symbolic poem, I will have to look this up to understand it better, or maybe you can explain this to me, what is the difference between this and a normal poem, guess I am still pretty new at reading and writing poems, lol
Tammi ( keep on writing )
PS it is a great poem. I loved it. |
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